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TrinityPhoenix
TrinityPhoenixLv103yrTrinityPhoenix

The first sentence on the synopsis made me aww the characters. It's cute! Also, a great start at the beginning of your story! I like the characters as well. Writing is okay, but just a little bit of putting the dot (.) and comma (,) at the right places. I think the author can fix that so it's fine with me. Overall it's all good. Keep up the good work author!

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A Song of Ancient Times

Sebastian_mechalis

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Sebastian_mechalis
Sebastian_mechalisAuthorSebastian_mechalis

Oh thank you so much!! Its really appreciated! I try my best to improve, i think you will notice if you keep reading. I made the writing more simpler and clear...(or so that's what i hope!) Thank you though for ur support!!!

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Sebastian_mechalis
Sebastian_mechalisAuthorSebastian_mechalis

Oh thank you so much!! Its really appreciated! I try my best to improve, i think you will notice if you keep reading. I made the writing more simpler and clear...(or so that's what i hope!) Thank you though for ur support!!!

3yr
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TrinityPhoenix
TrinityPhoenixLv10TrinityPhoenix

Looking forward for the story progress!

Sebastian_mechalis:Oh thank you so much!! Its really appreciated! I try my best to improve, i think you will notice if you keep reading. I made the writing more simpler and clear...(or so that's what i hope!) Thank you though for ur support!!!
3yr
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