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2020-08-29 07:40

The plot alone drew me in.☺️ It really reminded me of that one comic where a girl was transported back to Ancient Egypt and had a romance of a lifetime under the guise of Nefertari. Regardless, this story which is based in Ancient Korea(Goryo(?) I assume) is also fascinating. I enjoyed reading about the character's initial meeting. Tbh, the first chapter felt a little lengthy to read but the visualization was on point.👏 On a side note, there were a few redundant words, or sentences that could be phrased differently. Eg: "drought without rain" is basically redundant because drought already holds the meaning that there had been no rain and the weather was very hot. Aside from that. This is a beautifully structured and intriguing story. A lovely addition to my library. 😉

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Thank you very much! Your criticism is gladly accepted, i hope you genuinely enjoyed reading ❤

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