Review Detail of Lal_Kenji8thkazaha in HIATUS: The Inheritance of the 3 sannins

First of all, I don't consider myself a master author. In fact, I still see myself as a rookie in writing fanfiction. I'm not even sure if I'm qualified to give you advice, heck I would even suggest you ask Holyjoker for writing tips and advice. That guy can write soo many fanfics at the same time that it is actually pretty impressive. How that person imagines multiple stories at once, is quite a feat. As for how I make my stories...hmmm...To tell you honestly, some chapters are easier to write than others. You find yourself seating in front of a screen and you can just imagine how events play out. While some chapters are extremely hard to make. When that happens it doesn't matter how long you stare at a screen, you would find yourself not writing anything at all or just deleting stuff you typed. I had once deleted an entire chapter cause I hated it so much. During those times I would always take a few minutes break, sometimes even an hour to clear my head. After that, I return back to continue my chapter. Cause that is the only way your story will progress, " YOU STARE AT A SCREEN AND TYPE!". As for how the entire story plays out...I have an end goal I want to achieve and I just write/imagine how the characters would react to the circumstances I placed them on. In fact, it was only during the 4th volume where I had notes on how my story would play out. As for the 1st to 3rd volume, I mostly made the events as I seat on the chair staring at my laptop. Honestly, I would suggest you write down notes for key events in your story, and important details you don't want to forget. I found myself forgetting stuff because of this actually. I'm not gonna lie, I had made this mistake a couple of times in the past. I'm not sure if what I have written here helps you though. Just like you, I was once in your shoes. Writing, in general, is scary, you'll never know if you are wasting your time but you'll never know if what you imagine will entertain others. Hope this helps and make sure to ask other writers more qualified than me. Take care and God Bless!

I advise you to revise at least the first 60 chapters and there you can easily find that MC seems like Sakura, so to speak, there is everything you need to improve, but he is a weakling in his knowledge the three Sannins and Tsunade in the anime are shown stronger than the Hulk in the Marvel Cinematic Universe, but at the same time Danvers which, if the Hulk is stronger than the Hulk, was not so much able to fight with the MC without damage and at the same time it sounds very stupid, for the sake of this I decided to look for the approximate strength of Tsunade and the jirai, and it opens up it is measured for Tsunade with her technique of increasing strength in tens of thousands of tons, and approximate the power of jirai without a regime of thousands of tons, while Danvers has thousands of tons, that is, she should at least break her arm you write Fanfic about the cinematic universe of marvel and not from comics marvel it is indicated in the title so please stick to the marvel movie powers and comics otherwise there is a lot of confusion