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GooseOverlord
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2020-07-22 01:28

Since this is book 2 we can carry over some of the previous ratings. WQ, SoU and WB all get top marks from me, Updates have been plentiful lately since this used to be a 3 chapter a week series. I rarely get pulled out of the story due to writing issues so the quality is there and the world background seems deep. Both SD and CD have similar issues and thats due to some characters being seemingly forgotten, for example Princess Shan and Tianshi's sister, she disappeared from the narrative for so long that I've forgotten her name, to be fair they were mentioned in one of the last SC chapters. Overall this is a good series and the second book has a chance to elevate it.

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(as of 254) Romance have degraded very badly, i mean xiufeng again goes and just start basically sexually assaulting another woman who is sexually depraved, xiufeng gives the excuse that he is doing this for his lovers, wow! then why don't his lovers have 'fun' with other men to 'help' him? I mean he already have 15+ lovers but he still goes and start having s*x with her, its not even at the development as of nuwa, I mean show your elemental bracelet rather sexually assaulting her, I am just waiting when he will start sending his women to other men for taking their 'help'. The romance was well developed in spirit cultivation but in AHW, xiufeng just has become a s*x toy who only know to show his sexual prowess to women, same with katherine, liu xinyu, mermaid queen. The harem has also become very big, no screentime for likes of lisa, yu, wuying, etc. He just come to new place, it has a sexually depraved queen, to which he takes advantage and start having sexual relationship with him, no time for other girls who were well developed personalities with their characters, but now there are only lustful women left-katherine, xinyu, mermaid queen, etc. Only 10 lines of lemon was shown with lisa, like seriously? and here its been 3 chapters, he is sexually assaulting another woman, no development, no personality, no fluff, no romance, just lusting. Just the same thing with Nuwa, or rather it was 2-3 times more rushed, no badassness from xiufeng now, no training, all the things are done by ling and ming, he did not even cultivate properly, I have no qualms with dual cultivation but he do not do anything except that, everything from absorption to implementation are done by ling and ming, he just spout BS which he is very proud of and start showing his sexual prowess, basically he has become a s*x toy, he have 15+ women now but his little brother lose control in front of any beautiful woman, I really think that this guy now needs to be ntr'ed only then his eyes will open, the quality of harem, development and romance has degraded to sh*t from spirit cultivation. DISAPPOINTING. Spirit cultivation was one of the best novel i have ever read with great romance, the starting of AHW was also great but slowly slowly now it has very much degraded, basically the women are being forgotten now, they are not even mentioned 30-40 chapters, by which there had not been any interaction, *sigh* I hoped for much much better honestly. Just wanna say THANK YOU for SPIRIT CULTIVATION.

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