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Until now this is a good read. The story is well structured, the character/story development is also not too fast and it has constant updates. Not much is explained about the world until now and sometimes it‘s hard to follow since the grammar is somehow lacking a bit. The most mistakes you will see in this book will be vocabulary ones where an article or a verb is wrongly used. All in all it has great potential and the only thing which could make the story better is a editor/proofreader to reread and correct the spelling and grammar mistakes.

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Heaven Destroyer

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Thanks for the review. I will try to work on world-building. It is one of my weak points; hope you will go easy on me.