The system is great, everything else is mediocre at best. When things happen, they don't happen naturally they feel forced. The writing isn't that great, and there really isn't a clear red line. The characthers seem okay, haven't read enough to understand them yet but I don't get a strong impression from them. The world is a mess, and there are too many info dumps happening, and its too blatantly obvious. Anyhow, keep writing. You're doing well!
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