Item: A Rich Man's Lover
Rating: 5
Author: Neelu_Nath

Neelu_NathLv44yr

2020-08-12 23:29

Good build up of characters and slowly unfolding of the plot. Love the use of words of various origins. Please keep up the good work. Will love to read further about the story.👌👌👌👌

A Rich Man's Lover

mrmrcia

4.7

203 Chs

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mrmrciaAuthor

Obligatory Author's Review [Too shameless to not give myself a 5] I know that this novel is far from a deserving score. I still have a long way to go before I am able to elucidate on Syn's personality and emotions as my female lead. I am also keen on describing the sceneries as much as possible, by virtue of wanting the readers to see what I really have in mind for the visuals. I did not make Syn to be a relatable character. She's nowhere near being one, but I wanted to narrate how she can overcome the challenges in her life. This story is very close to my heart. I do wish that my grammar and writing skills would be capable enought to do justice on my story. I will make sure to improve on it. Thank you for reading, and may you all have a wonderful day!

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normaann_Lv2

The title and the synopsis itself suggests that the story would be bittersweet. I took my time to read to examine how the author writes. I really liked how every dialogue - prose - narrative - have been done so intricately. I couldn’t say I’ve seen better writing. But I believe it’s almost the same level as one book about they Fey back when I was reading at the university library. The text is devoid of errors; in fact, I could see none. The writing is just so flawless. The pacing is good as well — not too fast or otherwise. Just right. The plot is constructed beautifully as well. So far I’ve only read about four chapters and will read more.

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Jessica_D_ArellanoLv11

I love This story. Im always looking forward to an update. The story is very interesting and the writing quality is above all other story’s ive read on WebNovel. Amazing work!

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Saviour_of_EarthLv2

Because of the main theme of this story, I don't think it's for everyone. But I think if dark romance is the preference this will easily be one of the good ones that I've read. I'm still curious about what Syn's father sin was that made her turn against him. the ******* in the smut is there. build up is really good.

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ARDeliteLv2

This read is not your typical romance but also not that uncommon. I like the dark tone of the story and how the author conveys the emotions of the characters. The descriptions are a thing to marvel at. The progress might be too slow because of how the author is focused on describing things but its the charm of the story. I wanna learn of the premise that made Syn who she is right now and Konrad too. I kinda expect that Tristand and Syn won't last but it's still breaking my heart. This is a highly recommended read.

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ArdentReaderLv2

It's like my vocabulary is growing along while reading this rich man story. What I like most about it is how the author conveys the emotions in a visual way. the descriptions are well detailed and the sentence structure is effective in building the ambience of the story. I personally like that Syn is not letting herself be stepped on by by people. i will just have a hard time in choosing who I want for her. I hope that she becomes happy.

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Man, I just can't get over the possible angst that this story would gave me. I love the characters so much, the most would be Tristan. The fact that the love that this story is about does not copy those of young, puppy love. It's so immoral that it's thrilling.

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