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MacGillavry
MacGillavryLv113yrMacGillavry

Dude. Love the premise so far. It’s actually fun. If you continue with this, I would suggest delving into the mystery of how he became self-aware, if there’s some higher power or fluke in the system behind it, or just develop the character in his journey of self-discovery. There’s so many things you can do with this. But you also gotta explain the chicken. What does it do, exactly? Tell us!

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Essential NPC with a Chicken

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SquareGoat
SquareGoatAuthorSquareGoat

im already writing about the chicken for chapter 2, posting in a couple of hours cuz im a slow writer

MacGillavry
MacGillavryLv11MacGillavry

Noice

ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11ShibaTatsuya786

Probably just a fluke

Crimson_Assassin
Crimson_AssassinLv12Crimson_Assassin

I swear I see you everywhere

ShibaTatsuya786:Probably just a fluke
ShibaTatsuya786
ShibaTatsuya786Lv11ShibaTatsuya786

Maybe we have the same taste in novels

Crimson_Assassin:I swear I see you everywhere