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Review Detail of SaviorWrestle in Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)

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SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthor3yrSaviorWrestle

reviews not help, please comment on the chapter which is not readable. I have worked on 1st and 2nd chapters before for increasing readability and still I think those 2 have no problem. I am not sure about grammar but I can make sure that the content will be readable. I skip some words while reading as I not read aloud and see the meaning but if you comment on specific chapters I will take my time to read it and work on the sentences.

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Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)

SaviorWrestle

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Unholy_Student
Unholy_StudentLv4Unholy_Student

Is the story dropped?

Monk_Roman
Monk_RomanLv13Monk_Roman

what I mean by unreadable isn't that it is impossible to understand, but that the way you construct your paragraphs and your phrasing makes it hard to enjoy reading your story. I will try to comment on some of your paragraphs later to show you my meaning if you are interested.

ayub_moamed
ayub_moamedLv15ayub_moamed

Why did you dRop the story or are you taking a break right when i discovered it