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This was a great book! The only thing that got to me were the quite long paragraphs and when dialogs weren't on their own. The characters feel like string leads and their journey has just begun I cri! Other than the small critique, it's a great read and honestly something I will pick up again when there's more chapters! ❤️❤️💕

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I'm not used to dividing the text into paragraphs so I'm still working on that, thanks for the advice! :)