Review Detail of SSKV_R3D in (MOVED)

Hi, im not good in doing comment reviews so I'll just sum up my overall preview of your story. The story is very interesting, the way how you write the book inspire's me to follow the same format and the way how you develop the characters is great. The only thing I noticed is that sometimes the story is pretty predictable, try adding more story twist even though you are just in the early chapter so that there will be many "WOW" moments for the readers. THANK YOU