Review Detail of 8kkkkkkkk in Second Life's Revenge

Writing Quality: 4.5 - I liked how the author wrote, but there wasn't anything special or attention grabbing to it. If you know what I mean. Stability of Updates: 5.0 - I don't really know, so I can't judge. However, by this time a lot of chapters have already accumulated so, a 5.0. Story Development: 3.0 - Cliche. This could have been made up for by the writing quality, but the writing quality isn't really special either. Of course, there are a lot of cliches everywhere not just here but I feel the events in this story are especially dull. Get framed by sis, get friendly with mysterious duke, get chosen by weird god who immediately leaves after giving a voice message, get poisoned, yadayadayada. A bit repetitive, you know? Also a bit fast-paced, but otherwise decent. Character Design: 4.0 - Though I understand what the character is feeling, what does the author want the reader to feel? Should I feel pity, or anger, or sadness, or what? The emotions behind the protagonist are clear and shallow. Some advice: I'm not trying to impose, but it would be better if Laura had more of a specific charming aura to her. Right now, I kinda get the innocent, scared, pitiful rabbit with itty bitty fangs feeling. What does the author want Laura to be like? Ex. Melancholy, dangerous loli, mature charm, lonely and scared, consumed by vengeance - these are all decent examples of a clear character type. Right now Laura gives me an ambiguous kind of feeling. Heck, even Tine's hatred is described better than Laura's emotions. World Background: 4.0 - Satisfactory, but not really described. Basically, the only place I have a clear image of is Laura's orphanage up to Chapter 34, at least. Nowhere else is really described, so that removes some points. Plus, not much info is added about world background either. For example, no history, no elaboration on races, the reader only knows that everyone has not black hair and not purple eyes - except for Laura and that's only because Laura is the protagonist. Otherwise I have a feeling these unique features wouldn't even have been added. So yeah. Not a lot of detail, but filled in well. However, despite how nitpicky and naggy I've been this story is honestly pretty good. It's just that I personally don't appreciate the plot. So for anyone reading this review, take mine with a grain of salt. Thanks, Mnerenuk