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2021-01-21 13:46

Writing Quality: 4.5 - I liked how the author wrote, but there wasn't anything special or attention grabbing to it. If you know what I mean. Stability of Updates: 5.0 - I don't really know, so I can't judge. However, by this time a lot of chapters have already accumulated so, a 5.0. Story Development: 3.0 - Cliche. This could have been made up for by the writing quality, but the writing quality isn't really special either. Of course, there are a lot of cliches everywhere not just here but I feel the events in this story are especially dull. Get framed by sis, get friendly with mysterious duke, get chosen by weird god who immediately leaves after giving a voice message, get poisoned, yadayadayada. A bit repetitive, you know? Also a bit fast-paced, but otherwise decent. Character Design: 4.0 - Though I understand what the character is feeling, what does the author want the reader to feel? Should I feel pity, or anger, or sadness, or what? The emotions behind the protagonist are clear and shallow. Some advice: I'm not trying to impose, but it would be better if Laura had more of a specific charming aura to her. Right now, I kinda get the innocent, scared, pitiful rabbit with itty bitty fangs feeling. What does the author want Laura to be like? Ex. Melancholy, dangerous loli, mature charm, lonely and scared, consumed by vengeance - these are all decent examples of a clear character type. Right now Laura gives me an ambiguous kind of feeling. Heck, even Tine's hatred is described better than Laura's emotions. World Background: 4.0 - Satisfactory, but not really described. Basically, the only place I have a clear image of is Laura's orphanage up to Chapter 34, at least. Nowhere else is really described, so that removes some points. Plus, not much info is added about world background either. For example, no history, no elaboration on races, the reader only knows that everyone has not black hair and not purple eyes - except for Laura and that's only because Laura is the protagonist. Otherwise I have a feeling these unique features wouldn't even have been added. So yeah. Not a lot of detail, but filled in well. However, despite how nitpicky and naggy I've been this story is honestly pretty good. It's just that I personally don't appreciate the plot. So for anyone reading this review, take mine with a grain of salt. Thanks, Mnerenuk

Second Life's Revenge

anlaS0
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137 Chs

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anlaS0
anlaS0Author

Thank you for your honest review!!!

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Shaska
ShaskaLv3

ok, thanks for the review, it saves me wasting time reading a story that is just like all the others, I wonder why authors never try to create something original.

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anlaS0
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I just want to give myself a rating to somewhat start the review section. Anyway, this is my first work in web novel and I hope you enjoyed it. I wished to hear from you guys about this novel and so please leave a review! I will try my best to make the story more and more exciting and so please bear with me. Anyways that's all I want to say bye!

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PsyberRose
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Valorous_Bravery
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this novel is really interesting! it's a bit cliche (sister's feud) but this is more intriguing! i never expected the plot twists and face slapping. i love it when MC does that!. this book excites me to what happens next as well! I look forward to the next chapters!.

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SquareTaco
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it's nice to have a villain that is the blonde hair/ blue eyed person, that is not very common. Laura is truly an impressive young lady. I'm very eager to see how her relationships will grow the second time around.

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Bobaholic_girl
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Finally completed reading the novel. Its so interesting that every chapter keeps you on edge. The characters, setting, plot ..everything is just perfect. Keep up the good work Author. 😁

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Maria_Martins_6782
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Loved the story but not the end were she leave she should have stayed and built a new world and had should of helped the crown prince heal his hand and brought back his mana in the future but the rest was great

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nicolericky
nicolerickyLv10

Well so far it is really good the author to this book I do love reborn stories like these were the person can get a second chance to live and correct the pass

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alinsyazlin
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At first, the storyline was interesting to read.When i start read this story, fell in love with the character and want to know how she change her life. Curiosity about how laura transformed herself from the weak woman to a strong and villan. How does she want to avenge all the evil that tine did and show to the world that tine is an evil person with a double face.

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