Im sorry but the idea is good but the grammar holy **** my little niece is 8 years old and can write better then you. It's unreadable. It hurts my brain to read. And i didn't think it was possible but the grammar gets worst like wtf?? To anyone thinking of reading this DONT! unless you want to lose brain cells cuz of the grammar
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LIKEIceBoundSign:Thanks for the feedback. Just to let you know this is an mtl(Machine Translated) i just changed some name and edit some censored word so that you understand it even though the grammar is bad.
I recommend that after translating into English you use a spell and grammar checker, many proofreaders will suggest changing grammatical sentences, words or punctuation that make the text more cohesive and make sense, because if you just do a direct translation without first by brokers can cause many edioned errors.
IceBoundSign:Thanks for the feedback. Just to let you know this is an mtl(Machine Translated) i just changed some name and edit some censored word so that you understand it even though the grammar is bad.
dukroger:I recommend that after translating into English you use a spell and grammar checker, many proofreaders will suggest changing grammatical sentences, words or punctuation that make the text more cohesive and make sense, because if you just do a direct translation without first by brokers can cause many edioned errors.