Review Detail of Shadyninja in My life in Harry Potter( Rewrite coming soon)

I am surprised by the amount of good reviews for this fanfic. I read the first 3 chapters, chapter 10, and the newest chapter. It seems like a diary. There are barely character interactions and no interesting dialogue. I have nothing against wish fulfillment and harems if they make it interesting. Also an novel can be saved if it at least have a good mc and female lead. The textbook and diary format makes it very dry. Kind of like jerking to a math txbk. Introspection is good, but by itself, is just the main character living in his own head. It might get better later tho... pls dont take my criticisms seriously author. Do ur best!