Review Detail of LemonZawodowiec in My life in Harry Potter( Rewrite coming soon)

Thats quite dump. if you want to educate people first of you should be an example, this is why people learn easier when something is shown to them not when it's just told. Also you yourself know this story is **** and one dimensional the mc is dumb so the author made him shine by making everyone else dumber. What made me drop this is that the author doesn't even check if the things he is talking about are even true and from his story i can firmly say he knows nothing about investing and also the dates the companies where created. This is not the only thing if you pay attention whenever there is a talk closely related with complicated topics the author just skips them and says mc won the negotiation which is complete bull**** don't make a novel that needs critical thinking and deep knowledge on some topics if you dont know **** about them.

Hmm now that you brings some points of inconsistencies with reality I would cut some slack on this if the creation of said companies were off by a year or two. If it was more I would recommend changing the firm's to something more believable. But I could agree with you on this... So point taken. Now when it comes to the shallow plot in the areas you mentioned I can only defend author with the usual: he is not a professional writer, he has less time to write or this may even not be his point of focus in writing this story. I personally see the work such as this as a great framework to write something grand and proper with everything you mentioned fixed. --- I would like to advise you to check out "HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton". Author of this work made 2 versions of this story. One that is prim and proper with attention to details and the other one wrote in similar fashion to this book that is a draft of the proper work and is much more forward in storyline progress. One you would rate much higher and the other you would berate as much as this one. --- I don't read fanfics with the same criticism and seriousness as original work and that is because of one simple reason I PAY for books while fanfics are FREE. So in my humble opinion when I see a fanfic that is bad it is better to write why it is and not just empty "it's bad, don't read it, author should hang himself cause 5y old can do better" --- I personally have my own fanfic I write in my Google doc and it is a work based on World of Warcraft WOTLK. And I want to place all quests from ga!e into the book connected in a main plot. I am no Asmongold and I know jack sh... about game in details so I know how hard it is to make everything awesome and balanced and ... --- Ok let's not go further into that hole... So all I want is for people to treat others as they want to be treated. I think that not the whole internet is a Salty Twitch chat...

interesting way of looking at things.... I agree with well half of your points especially the last one

you have a point, also i will check the work out though i think im already reading it. Oh yea btw dude will you be posting your work on webnovel???

Posting anything on Webnovel by me... It's complicated. I would need to read the Terms of service. For what I heard Webnovel have in ToS paragraph saying that they basically own what YOU/me post on their page. Second point of concern is how they block/censor any link that let's readers support writers monetarily. Patre0n, PayPa11 are getting censored by algorithm. Third is that you can't have any foul language in your work that's getting censored too. Now imagine what would happen if I upload a fanfic which uses all quests texts from wow almost word by word. I don't earn a penny Webnovel gets rise on their advertising income and blizzard sue me... I would like to see world burn and see blizzard try to take down content on Chinese portal but I don't want to burn with it... Well maybe I could upload the first chapter or 2 to see a stampede of people trying to get me for more :D (I'm that confident in my and Blizzard's work)

Food critics aren’t necessarily good chefs. That being said, this story definitely isn’t a 5 star. You giving it a 5 stars to spite the “unqualified” critics is pretty hypocritical.

I 100% agree with your statement. But I believe the main point of my 5star is stated in the last sentence of the review. Furthermore in the conversation under the review you can get the idea what is my honest impression of this work. ------ Now being fair could you please check the list of reviews and sort by newest. I would like to write the same what you wrote to me under Kirse review and tell him hat this work deserve maybe not 5stars but something more than 1star and only dots as a review. ------ Thank You for Your honest opinion.

Why would I do that? I only replied to you cause you at least had an argument, which I found is in spite plus hypocritical. Plus, you do happen to more noticeable. The people giving out 1 stars and just saying it’s trash... I rather not try to reason with people who can’t comprehend: what criticism is how not being entirely fluent in English is how first starting out writing is and how difficult it can be That some “authors” are actually much younger then you’d think And so much more, it’s actually retarded. There are people writing out fanfics, to just share a bit of their fantasies, to improve their writing, or even to just have yet some readers expect everyone to be entirely fluent, and a professional writer or atleast hold them to that level. I agree with you, but I don’t agree with handing out 5 stars out of spite or pity, although your 5 star don’t mean much cause of the retards giving out 1 stars just to demean author who is learning how to write without giving any criticism or ways to improve.