Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Broken Lips
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Cool. Grammar-wise, its kind of rough around the edges. Not too detrimental, but could use a touch-up in terms of general grammar. In turn, the dialogue and prose kinda suffer from the same problem, though it won't really affect the reader if you get engrossed enough. The strength in this is in the atmosphere and descriptions. It's colorful, and it really gives a clear picture of the scene. Word of advice: Your quality would vastly improve if you run your stuff through Grammarly. It's free. Keep on writing👍
Broken Lips
Nikkie_LZ
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Nikkie_LZAuthorNikkie_LZ
MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken
No worries (^^)/ English isn't my prime language as well. I just learned through years of media consumption and internet use. You'll get there eventually (^_^)
Nikkie_LZ:Thanks really! I know grammar is one of my biggest problems. I am bit insecure since my first language is not English [Actually learned recently]
Nikkie_LZAuthorNikkie_LZ
MokouFriedChicken:No worries (^^)/ English isn't my prime language as well. I just learned through years of media consumption and internet use. You'll get there eventually (^_^)