Thank you author for this story. Indeed nicely laid out from the start. I could imagine the pitiful start of Razak’s origin when he was brought in and out of orphanage and how he landed up with his previous drunken foster father which abused him. The character moulding is good in terms of how he has grown up and how his attitude is towards others and his perception about how unfortunate he is and that it is his fate. I still can’t make out if there’s a twist on how he is capitalising on his new found ability of being a gem ie carrying the most rarest yet precious magician DNA I call it post test results. And looking forward to see the twisting fate of his on the deal he made on getting through with his deal partner on positions in politics with magic. His academy days I can imagine it would be an interesting chapter with Yasumi - princess of Ito clan introduced into the plot. All in all well written. I can clearly visualise how the coin flipping and the setup in the plenary session where the program will start off. Good job looking forward to the plot as you move the readers along it. Thumbs up and great effort. Well done author!
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