got to be honest didn't really Love the story so far, BUT I am looking forward to what you do with it. this is just your startup so I want to leave judgment for after at least 10-20 chapters. but so far I would rate your story a 4.9/10 which is still pretty good start and when I read your later chapters these one you've written will mean more and bump it up ALOT more
Lazyy
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LIKEBeing open to criticism is a good sign. Many authors get tilted by the reviews and drop their stories. Thanks for the fanfic.
Lazyy:If you don't mind me asking, what was wrong (in your opinion) with the story? I'd like to know for further chapters and so I don't make the same mistakes.
Lazyy:If you don't mind me asking, what was wrong (in your opinion) with the story? I'd like to know for further chapters and so I don't make the same mistakes.