Item: Marvel/DC: The Fighter
Rating: 2
Author: Dakratas

DakratasLv134yr

2020-07-24 18:54

So first of all, I only read about 4 chapters but I'm sure that this is already enough. I think this review is necessary, so that all people who would like to see what kind of character the mc is, can decide if they want to read it or not. This story is missing some important tags. At first, I thought the story is missing the tag "Anti-Hero", but when I considered it a little bit more, it's not "Anti-Hero" the story is missing but the stronger cousin "Evil Protagonist". The mc is killing in order to grow stronger. I have no problems with that. I have a problem with the people the mc is killing. It's literally everyone. If he attacks a town he will kill all citizens. It doesn't matter if they are 1-month-old babies, children, women, innocent old people, everyone. It's a story about a person killing all people who are worth it and their relatives if it's not too much of a hassle to grow stronger. But why is he doing it? I am going to copy the exact words which were in the novel, "it was mainly because I was bored". I have been reading novels for a few years now on all kinds of websites like Webnovel, RR, WuxiaW, and private translation teams. That is the first time I've come across such a psychopathic mass-murdering mc. The reason is that typically there are tags that are warning people like me that the mc is a psychopath with no morals. That's not the case here, so I am writing this review to warn all people who like kind and neutral MCS. People who have no problem with mass-murdering baby killing merciless psychopathic protagonists who will do anything to grow stronger can ignore my review.

Marvel/DC: The Fighter

Lazyy

4.7

14 Chs

Liked by 33 people

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ClearSkySageLv4

your first time only now man? you sure read only good stuff before

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DakratasLv13

Well I did read Warlock of the Magus World to the end. But idk is has been too long. Not sure I would read it again. Atleast Leylin isn't killing people because he was "bored"

ClearSkySage:your first time only now man? you sure read only good stuff before

4yr

SUCKMYBICKLv3

Thank You for this review!

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Mark_1_5173Lv2

Oh shit never thought I'd see you here, u write my favorite book

ClearSkySage:your first time only now man? you sure read only good stuff before

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ClearSkySageLv4

Oh thanks man.

Mark_1_5173:Oh shit never thought I'd see you here, u write my favorite book

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CalciumLurcherLv10

did you give this a bad review just because you perceive the character as evil?

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Ark_BloodfallenLv3

You know Beerus right?

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