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2020-10-10 03:41

I love this book eventhough I finished it in less than fifteen minutes but I definitely wish she had exerted more revenge on him ,made him suffer every pain she went through in his hands well, good to read, you should try it.

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Thanks author for going through the thoughts and emotions writing the story this way. it is indeed a down to earth way - presenting certain perpective of life from Chloe’s life’s experience. Great to read how this story portray Alex’s behaviour and insecurity. How those were manifested into his bullying actions - a self protection mode of not wanting to be seen as vulnerable and insecure, unable to convey love in its truest form until he realises his feelings when Chloe fell sick and towards the end My comments as such 1. Through reading the letters i am able to establish both chloe and Alex character well. chloe: why is she suffering - being called overweIght / fat, physically and emotionally battered and how she self react to the anger and hurt, as a reader i can imagine her emotions drawing from the letters, similarly to Alex’s. 2. I’d like to draw more on the benefit of this story and the meaning behind that may be relevant to some readers. For those who have been in such scenario and those who might have come across such scenarios - these writings may help them encapsulate the inner feelings of the victim or the bullier - sometimes things seen at the surface may hold deeper meaning such as Alex’s insecurity that can only be dealt through self realization. 3. Emotions are well defined / depicted throughout leaving readers anticipating ‘what’s wrong’ flipping through each chapter until those are revealed finally towards later part. Well done author for delivering the mesage and story effectively.

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