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Dodge_Buddy_2194
Dodge_Buddy_2194Lv153yr
2021-01-17 00:18

It is very hard to write about time and space, so not many authors are brave enough to do it. I give you props for trying Pros: The premis is good and the story is moving along. Cons: The characters are flat and have no enotions. They are about to fly on a large eagle and his 2 companions close their eyes to sleep? Where is the awe, excitement, fear? this already was a red flag about how the book was written. They get to the city and he already knows what the statue’s name is? There needs to be a bit of mystery and character interaction were he find out who it is. You need stop giving the main character everything because it’s unbelievable. This book is probably good for begining readers but for readers like me who have hundreds of hours reading, this book is too simple with no twists and turns, no excitement.

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DaoistLwRAFO
DaoistLwRAFOLv2

Any good recommendation. Buddy

Dodge_Buddy_2194
Dodge_Buddy_2194Lv15

Monarch of Time

MrHerrax
MrHerraxLv1

comments like this I love most

Petuh_Gasaebich
Petuh_GasaebichLv1

Tried to read it after your advice. 25 chapters in and it's one of the worst books I've read. MC is impulsive and does not make any sense; everyone (including MC) starts offending everyone they meet for no reason just to show pikachu face after they get rightful retaliation. If anyone decides to read Monarch of time after reading the comment above mine - don't waste your time, it's not worth it.

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Krilltasty
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A newer book to try is blood for magic, premise is pretty good. Great world building, the beginning chapters have a few time skips but otherwise quality book

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