Review Detail of Solivagant_Kaguya in Fraternising The Enemy

I have nothing to say hahahhaha. Hmm you have a capability to be a writer. But still a lot of things you need to learn about writing stories, like forming a plot, and makin life to a character, and so much more. But yeah it's great that as a beginner you write the prologue nicely. So yeah be confident at you work, be yourself, don't stop learning about how to write stories etc, and be proud. Good luck self.