Review Detail of mrmrcia in The Sassy President is My Husband

Mei Feng is quite in the middle of troublesome people. I hope that rather than getting strung around, she would toughen up and stand up for herself more properly. :>> I don't know if it's because your chapters were short, or it's just that the pacing of the story was quite fast? Also, I have some qualms with the misuse/absence of some punctuation marks. This mistake often leads to run-ons/comma splices. I perfectly understand your passages, but I just want to tell you that your narration could look even more beautiful. Be aware of some verb tenses too. Overall, MeiFeng being bewildered could be felt through your wonderful narration. Please keep it up!