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I’m loving the story so far! Excellent world building and storyline, quite engaging. Could use a good edit; pronouns off in places and spelling errors the biggest ones. Found myself confused a couple times as to who was talking because of pronouns getting mixed up. Still, it doesnt take away from the amazing story. Keep up the good work !

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A Gorgeous White (BL)

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