Review Detail of herjoh in Reborn in Twilight

Im plesantly suprised how well It's writen. While im no big fan of twilight, how well the characters are describe and acts is well done. Since a lot of fan-fics and novels tend to gloss over character aperance and their role. here we habe fully fleshed out characters, at the same time the characters we have seen until now have something not many other stories have , and that is flaws . So we can see from the getgo that most are not there just to fill space. I love the 2 pow changes between the mc and the love intrest. and it clearly gives the meaning that it is theese two the story is about ,while i am a bit suprised about how fast the love is moving , it dont feel rushed and forced. they feel a lot more like they are made for eachother. The only thing really holding the story back is the amount of chapters (10 at the moment of writing). But i hope the author can continue to make such great chapters insted of just pumping out a mass of garbage that we unfortunaly have to deal with here. Salut to the author and good job