updates are a bit slow and sometimes inconsistent but it's fine as long as it's not dropped. grammar is decent. storyline is pretty solid. sometimes estelle questions things she has mentioned before, so it gets a bit repetitive. i think i know estelle's identity, but i might be wrong. it'll be nice to see reina and estelle's personality overlap if you can, because apparently the real estelle contacted her through a dream, so her sould shouldn't be completely gone yet (?) i'll read more of this, will be waiting for updates.. good work, author. good read to pass time with.
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