Alright, first and foremost the grammar is great compared to a majority of the originals on this site. I’m not sure if you have a editor or not, but either way it’s actually enjoyable to read. So far the MC hasn’t been an indecisive cuck, so that’s a plus. All in all, this review is subject to change because the story is new (at least to me), but i’m looking forward to it Author-Kun!
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