I quite like this novel so far the only problem has been the lack of flow of some sentences but over all a good novel so far~_~ I hope it continues
Lynhart
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I really want to re write this novel to fix the way the author writes and the few mistakes especially in the first few chapters were you gain the reader interest.
Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I have fixed the mistakes you found on chapter 2 and 3. I will recheck the other chapters again.