Review Detail of Mariya_Abdulhasan in An Odd Little Girl

I think this story needs a little character development. It's starting to get really serious and the only person who warms it up is Alyth. I also really like the warm love between her and her father. I think that there should be more characters and friends for Alyth. You should update following a schedule. I don't mean to rush you, but I hope you write more because this story is actually pretty interesting.