usually don't write negative reviews this just bugged me. firstly I don't mind I lf when you go into another world you change the system of that world slightly however if you don't follow your previous set out ideas and make it unnecessarily convaluted your just being illogical and making plotholes as seen in this book. I have read pretty far thinking it will get better however I now realise I have wasted my time.
ClearSkySage
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LIKEWell if you could point out the plotholes I would be grateful as I can't see then. As for wasting your time I can do nothing about it, life is about experiences both good and bad, and if you don't like the novel there are still people that like it, just hope you find something good for your tastes. ~~Godbye, and a good life to you~~