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Review Detail of WikiLover in Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

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WikiLover
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So this novel is pretty good, just the POV stuff from the MC is really good and all the references are hilarious. The problem is the dialogue. It’s stilted and kind of reminds me of the Swedish guys from family guy if you don’t know them here’s a good link: https://youtu.be/RWhnUdakiXA Other than the dialogue and the sheer amount of time it took for the author to explain the training I’m hopeful for the future. It feels kinda like the story is still in its prologue and soon he will be strong and then we can start to see him just enjoying life and messing about in the world. I really hope this doesn’t become a power wank fest that’s just one level of training and powering up after another.

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Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

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ClearSkySage
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thanks for the tips I will try to improve it.