Review Detail of Gadloner in Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

Item: Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

GadlonerLv43yrGadloner

The story is good but it takes a lot of effort to understand because of some wrong grammar and the MC is very OP so I like it...........All in all its good just need the grammar

Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

ClearSkySage

Liked by 9 people

Replies5

D_Cole_oNealLv1D_Cole_oNeal

I agree, honestly the story is good and the MC seems cool. It's just the grammar is almost overwhelmingly bad. It is something that will improve overtime.

3yr

ClearSkySageAuthorClearSkySage

Thanks for your words, I will try to improve in the future.

3yr

hricky205Lv13hricky205

I have a question. Has it improved?

3yr

GadlonerLv4Gadloner

It's not as bad when the author started

hricky205:I have a question. Has it improved?

3yr

ClearSkySageAuthorClearSkySage

I hope yes.

hricky205:I have a question. Has it improved?

3yr