Review Detail of ClearSkySage in Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).
Review detail
Me right now using the hidden forbidden Jutsu the famous glorified Thick Skin no Jutsu or more know as Shameless no Jutsu to give me 5 Stars. muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhaha.
Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).
ClearSkySage
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You got little support because what you do all time is info dump, show training progress and zero character development or world background, no intereactions nothing at all, a dull character hold zero interaction with others didn't see even a single conversation. Sorry buddy but that gave a great hit to our book, you are quite informed about naruto stuffs but your writing sucks (not language not grammar but the way you write 'form' worth nothing) You would have gotten into top 20 at least with this if you got a proper writing form. You can see that most fanfics at least show interactions, simply this is just info dump and details
this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.
Lunarian_King:You got little support because what you do all time is info dump, show training progress and zero character development or world background, no intereactions nothing at all, a dull character hold zero interaction with others didn't see even a single conversation. Sorry buddy but that gave a great hit to our book, you are quite informed about naruto stuffs but your writing sucks (not language not grammar but the way you write 'form' worth nothing) You would have gotten into top 20 at least with this if you got a proper writing form. You can see that most fanfics at least show interactions, simply this is just info dump and details
ClearSkySage:this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.
ClearSkySage:this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.
CliffkunLolRekt:You making your novel a harem or your future ones a harem?
gkfk:the main character will not leave her alone while he is traveling right
