Review Detail of ButterflyMariposa in Detective Couple's Secret

Before I start this, I will like to reiterate a few things. This review is my personal opinion, and I am by no means forcing my views on anyone reading it. My goal is to give some tips and advice to the author so that future readers will have a better reading experience. The plot itself is pretty straightforward. The author does a somewhat competent job to communicating it. At the very least, I could follow the main gist of what is happening. However, there are some moments of confusion due to poor grammar and lack of quotation marks. My suggestion for the author is maybe use Grammarly or ask someone to help edit. Many people get turned off if they don’t understand what they are reading. I haven’t read after Chapter Two because the book was hard to understand.