Review Detail of Sizzin in Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]

I decided to drop this story at chapter 70. I just can't find the pleasure to keep reading it anymore. I liked the fact that the MC gave his family and friends resources so they could get stronger. I really dislike when only the MC keeps on getting stronger even when he clearly can help those he love/trust. But... it really was a little too much. Reading this fanfic reminded me of when I play Tale of Immortal with Cheat Engine. I create a super overpowered sect by giving everyone cultivation items I duplicated. It's funny actually, when you're the one doing. Not so much when you're reading about someone else doing. I don't mind the clone part, though I believe they were badly used. It really looked like they were only created for the sake of being with a girl the MC wanted to be with but wouldn't because he swore he wouldn't have more than two wives. ... However, with only the two points above, I could still try to finish the story and give about a 3.5~4 rating. Now onto the real reason why I gave so low a rating. I am a sucker for character interaction. 2.5D~3D characters, living people, interacting with the world. And unfortunately, all I found in this fanfic were NPCs that could only listen to what the MC wanted. Seriously. There's hardly any dialogue, there're only orders from the MC towards someone else. Almost every interaction was like: MC - "Hey, take this, do that." Named NPC - "Ok" MC goes to another NPC. Repeat. The whole universe revolved around the MC. It felt like he was playing with dolls. "Today I'm going to dress up this doll, and I'm going to throw that other one in the trash." I can't say it was bad for a first story, though. Being a aspiring author myself, I understand the challenge of writing something good. One of the main reasons I never posted any story I wrote. This is just not my style of narrative. It started really good, but it got caught up in a bad loop. Nevertheless, thank you for the ride. It was good while it lasted, honestly.