This was a good TDG fanfic that I enjoyed reading until the disaster in chapter 63. Those messy clones and stuff gives me a really creepy NTR feeling. It takes a lot of effort to write something good but only a single mistake can be quite disastrous. This fanfic is the best example of it. I can only suggest the author to think about romance and harem development quite thoroughly before introducing anything like this in his future novels. Don't ever step into the NTR trap, even if it is a little bit suggesting. Anyway, thanks for the work until chapter 63, I really enjoyed it till then.
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