Review Detail of Ryofu in Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
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This fanfic was good until the chapter 61. From there the MC start to duplicate his memory in new bodies, that don't look like the MC, to create clone of himself, it destroyed the story completely. Then the clone of the MC then start to go after other women since the MC himself swore to stay with only Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ning'er. The MC is breaking his vow and cheating on them by playing innocent since "its not him" despite being his own mind and himself that choose the women they go after.
Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Wise_Snail
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The MC never said he was interested in the other women? Sure, at first he wanted to have them all, but he never actually tried with anyone besides his two fiancees. At most it was just lust. For me, it's quite logical that the "new" Nie Li went for Yang Xin. Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ning'er being off limit, the closest woman he knew of and that he could make into his wife is her. (I'm talking both about character and appearance).
Ryofu: It also feel like he NTR himself since he allow his clone to get with women he is interested in but can't go after them himself because he swore not to...
The moment the clone was created with the memory of the MC and a different body the clone directly think about courting other women, the MC even say he will send his clone after them... So yes, he is interested in them but restrain himself due to the promise. The way the author said it show that he wanted the women to be part of the MC Harem but he cant because of the promise.
Henki:The MC never said he was interested in the other women? Sure, at first he wanted to have them all, but he never actually tried with anyone besides his two fiancees. At most it was just lust. For me, it's quite logical that the "new" Nie Li went for Yang Xin. Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ning'er being off limit, the closest woman he knew of and that he could make into his wife is her. (I'm talking both about character and appearance).
Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
That's one of the problem when you have chapter for patreon only and not many people are there since you can't see the direct repercussion of the chapter and change it at that time. I would not put any clone if you create another novel, even if they are linked with the MC, the problem with clone is that it's not the same body and can be considered as "another" or "someone else" body. If you have many harem members (more than 4) you might want to give some kind of time ability to the MC if you want him to "entertain" all of his harem at the same time.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.