The idea of the story is quite good. but many grammatical errors like a man becomes her and many others. Word per chap needs more juice especially novels like this that mention status and item description so work hard thor. I think you should focus on one story then write multiple ones if you think this story is progressing well. Don't worry, I'll be back when more chapters are available. Keep the good work and happy writing. :) Thanks
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LIKEBilly_Castellanos:Thank you for the honest reviews. Will work hard for that UwU.