Beginning few chapters are a bit rough. dynamic and flow is fast but they are solid explaining what needs to be said. The World setting is unquie and I am enjoying this quite a lot while only brig about 41 chapters into the story. The writing style is almost done classicialy with typically printed books. a little rushed but with daily updates happening I don't blame the author. Writing style and Descriptions of the Settings are perfect. Such as things are seen as per the Character not so much like as if you were to hit pause and and do a 360 look around. Author is keeping MC on track and while I can say from what I seen Plot armor is thick yet transparent, it is explained simply as it should be. Following that thought what story isn't heavy with it. As of now from what I have seen this book is well written and not very many grammatical errors are present. So A+ there. All worlds take time to Develope and with the MC being from a small village and no real knowledge of outside world he paces along nicely. Keep it up.
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