Review Detail of Prrrgadilly in Rebirth of the Phoenix God

Let the record show that I only got 23 full chapters in and immediately halted reading in the 24th chapter as Fen ogled Kaisha for the nth time. Also, I appreciate the premise of the novel and I respect the author's willingness to shirk overworked literary tropes in favor of some semblance of novelty and originality. I will also commend the author for writing the first Webnovel I've read that literally left me legitimately pissed. The story was just too damn vague. There is no background; we, the readers, don't even know what Fen already knows. Nothing is explained to us. None of the characters want to give him a straight answer, and seem more interested in using misdirection and sleight of hand to lead him by the nose. The characters are all acting as if they're all involved in some big joke and the only one getting screwed over is Fen. He himself is more absorbed with some random pretty girl's cleavage, than surivival in what is basically a hostile situation. Despite, or rather in spite, of the fact that he's supposedly possessed of great hunter instincts. His personality is all over the place and more akin to an addict using recreational drugs than someone suffering from immense mental traumas. I could go on, but these are the most important issues I had while reading. I will honestly say that this story would work a lot more effortlessly in first person than third. I read in another review that the author is trying to share Fen's perspective with the reader, so they understand his confusion, ignorance, and fustration. All it did was make me feel like the author was trying to hoodwink me. That's what first person point-of-view is for. Third person is inherently removed and passive; it is an outside observer's perspective. Without supporting explanations and insights into the cause or motivations of event and actions, this POV falls flat. Suspense and mystery are created by TELLING the reader that a character has overlooked something important or that a characters tone of speech hints at a deeper meaning. TL;DR Good story with potential but the poor execution made it too arduous for me to enjoy.