Review Detail of reqrwq2 in Rebirth of the Phoenix God
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This novel may not have the action young master troupe from the get go like chinese novel, what it has is the harem vibe. Girls will fall into MC'c lap no question asked. A damn priest girl will get all touchy touchy with MC. And MC will flirt even after watching his master who took care of him from childhood and his first love to get tortured and burnt to death by the same church of the priest girl. MC don't feel like a normal human ****. As much as author tries to take pride in saying that the novel is slow paced with great world building, all that explanations appears to be introduction of a wet dream romance of a horny **** where he would have harem of girls with different character like one horny, one innocent nerd.... etc.
Rebirth of the Phoenix God
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the priest girl? His childhood friend whose arc will trully behin in at least 300-400 chapters? Kaisha who was clearly suggested to have deeper reasons behind her decision to join church? The church itself that was already implied to not equal the inquisition? Yes. I do take pride with how slow-paced and developed this story is and with how what you see in the first apperance of every character is nothing but an illusion of what you are made to see. This novel isn't by any means popular, so I decided to take my time with it instead of rushing for the common tripes and simple plots. The fact that you fail to notice a reasonable amount of foreshadowing, implications and hints only serves as a praise that I did a great job concealing them, only motivating me to keep going. Thanks :D
I hate mindless harem as much as I hate young master troupe. I don't hate slow paced novel if its not filled up with repeating people reacting to how awesome MC is or rinse and repeat fight and cultivation level with adding true or golden or "close to peak of low/mid/high" tier of some level or country part of empire of a continent of other world of other dimension troupe. But if my loved ones died in the same manner of mc's I wouldn't be able to flirt with random girl in a matter of month who i met for the first time. Some might do that with self hurting mentality like people would drink or do drugs but i think no teenager would be cool like mc as if he totaly forgot about their death.
MotivatedSloth:the priest girl? His childhood friend whose arc will trully behin in at least 300-400 chapters? Kaisha who was clearly suggested to have deeper reasons behind her decision to join church? The church itself that was already implied to not equal the inquisition? Yes. I do take pride with how slow-paced and developed this story is and with how what you see in the first apperance of every character is nothing but an illusion of what you are made to see. This novel isn't by any means popular, so I decided to take my time with it instead of rushing for the common tripes and simple plots. The fact that you fail to notice a reasonable amount of foreshadowing, implications and hints only serves as a praise that I did a great job concealing them, only motivating me to keep going. Thanks :D
I had to take a while to figure out a way to explain it to you without spoiling the entire novel. And you are right in one regard. If YOUR's close ones were to die, you wouldn't react the way the MC of this story did. But guess what, they won't write books about your life because no one would be ever bored enough to read them. That's why people write and read fantasy novels - to experience something different. In other words, you assumed some stuff, created your own idea of what this story is about in your own head, and now you are angry/disappointed that this story didn't follow the plan that you set for it? You guessed that some stuff would happen in a certain way, because that's what would happen to you. So I assume you are capable of manipulating fire at will and once burned, you wouldn't die as well, right? Or not? But if you can't manipulate the fire like the MC can, if being burned at the stake would result in your death instead of titular rebirth, then why in every other scenario MC should follow the pattern of what you would do? What makes you believe that you are even remotely close to dictating how MC should behave with how your entire life was born and polished on earth, in earthy realm of what's possible and what not, in earthly (and I assume, civilised part of it) society where you are catered to as a child?
reqrwq2:I hate mindless harem as much as I hate young master troupe. I don't hate slow paced novel if its not filled up with repeating people reacting to how awesome MC is or rinse and repeat fight and cultivation level with adding true or golden or "close to peak of low/mid/high" tier of some level or country part of empire of a continent of other world of other dimension troupe. But if my loved ones died in the same manner of mc's I wouldn't be able to flirt with random girl in a matter of month who i met for the first time. Some might do that with self hurting mentality like people would drink or do drugs but i think no teenager would be cool like mc as if he totaly forgot about their death.
He’s saying when normal people get tortured and watch their loved ones die they don’t just get over it in a week it affects them emotionally and mentally. And he should still be out of it at the beginning and shouldn’t of felt embarrassed in the bath he should feel disconnected from reality not really paying attention to whats happening around him.
MotivatedSloth:I had to take a while to figure out a way to explain it to you without spoiling the entire novel. And you are right in one regard. If YOUR's close ones were to die, you wouldn't react the way the MC of this story did. But guess what, they won't write books about your life because no one would be ever bored enough to read them. That's why people write and read fantasy novels - to experience something different. In other words, you assumed some stuff, created your own idea of what this story is about in your own head, and now you are angry/disappointed that this story didn't follow the plan that you set for it? You guessed that some stuff would happen in a certain way, because that's what would happen to you. So I assume you are capable of manipulating fire at will and once burned, you wouldn't die as well, right? Or not? But if you can't manipulate the fire like the MC can, if being burned at the stake would result in your death instead of titular rebirth, then why in every other scenario MC should follow the pattern of what you would do? What makes you believe that you are even remotely close to dictating how MC should behave with how your entire life was born and polished on earth, in earthy realm of what's possible and what not, in earthly (and I assume, civilised part of it) society where you are catered to as a child?
In simple terms the mc does not feel like a person but a robot, lunatic or druggy. He feels fake and no normal person can relate to him.
MotivatedSloth:I had to take a while to figure out a way to explain it to you without spoiling the entire novel. And you are right in one regard. If YOUR's close ones were to die, you wouldn't react the way the MC of this story did. But guess what, they won't write books about your life because no one would be ever bored enough to read them. That's why people write and read fantasy novels - to experience something different. In other words, you assumed some stuff, created your own idea of what this story is about in your own head, and now you are angry/disappointed that this story didn't follow the plan that you set for it? You guessed that some stuff would happen in a certain way, because that's what would happen to you. So I assume you are capable of manipulating fire at will and once burned, you wouldn't die as well, right? Or not? But if you can't manipulate the fire like the MC can, if being burned at the stake would result in your death instead of titular rebirth, then why in every other scenario MC should follow the pattern of what you would do? What makes you believe that you are even remotely close to dictating how MC should behave with how your entire life was born and polished on earth, in earthy realm of what's possible and what not, in earthly (and I assume, civilised part of it) society where you are catered to as a child?
The criticism that the boy made is valid. It's really frustrating when a character we like make somethings that's incomprehensible to us (ethically or morally), even though the culture that shaped the personality could justify such actions. This leaves a bad feeling, even if it is justifiable.
MotivatedSloth:I had to take a while to figure out a way to explain it to you without spoiling the entire novel. And you are right in one regard. If YOUR's close ones were to die, you wouldn't react the way the MC of this story did. But guess what, they won't write books about your life because no one would be ever bored enough to read them. That's why people write and read fantasy novels - to experience something different. In other words, you assumed some stuff, created your own idea of what this story is about in your own head, and now you are angry/disappointed that this story didn't follow the plan that you set for it? You guessed that some stuff would happen in a certain way, because that's what would happen to you. So I assume you are capable of manipulating fire at will and once burned, you wouldn't die as well, right? Or not? But if you can't manipulate the fire like the MC can, if being burned at the stake would result in your death instead of titular rebirth, then why in every other scenario MC should follow the pattern of what you would do? What makes you believe that you are even remotely close to dictating how MC should behave with how your entire life was born and polished on earth, in earthy realm of what's possible and what not, in earthly (and I assume, civilised part of it) society where you are catered to as a child?