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Review Detail of Knights_Errant in Game System in MHA

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I have enjoyed it so far. The story keeps me wishing for the next chapter so that's a good thing. Only complaint is updates I think you're writing too many novels at the same time and now you're stuck in a trap of writing all of them. This damages your work rate if I am waiting too long for chapter I will forget about this novel. Focus on this one as I think it's your best work yet. I had my concerns at the rando girl early on together with cultivation world but soon you patched it all together into something great. I think you can improve by slowing down the progression and detailing the daily life I can think of many entertaining chapters such as villagers first time encountering creepers and endermen. The female interest door is open I can imagine a villager wanting to marry his daughter to the MC for close ties to the leader. Just don't make it cheesy or cringe. Good luck 👍

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By best I mean most potential.