Review Detail of Zafkiel_2566 in N/A None

First of all, I wanted to point out the occasional wrong grammars, its a bit annoying to read so you should get a proofreader. The writing quality is awesome, the grammar could be improved 3 stars. The story development is nice and easy, I have only read Chapter 1 as of now so I can't say more 5 stars. The characters are well designed, but Im wondering why they both have emerald greens eyes 4 stars. The writer is consistent and the chapters are long 4 stars. So I have been excited the most about the world background. I would really hope to learn more about the rules and physics of the world and such. -Bone