Review Detail of amaturewriter in Elder Brother (ATG)

Que revolta cara,o autor não entrou em detalhes ussa sua imaginação eu quê foi oque o autor pensou

Magnificient Reveiw.

-Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon so much stupid ****

Yeah.. same thing as the other story posted by the writer: absolute nonsense quality. If you'd been a painter, the wall behind your canvas would be 10 different colors by now.

He is a gary stu character, his herb garden+library of heavens path is an OP cheat that can easily destroying the world, he can destroy the world easily with poison(he uses the antidote to his important persons and himself), he can create OP technique to erase the world easily nyaa !!!

Try reading again, you will become a fanboy of this fanfic nyaa !!!

Please give this fanfic a chance nyaa !!!

everything that happens is cause of plot, I read this and his other AGT FF..the forced **** ruins it for me my dude

Try re-reading and checking details thoroughly

try learning about CD first

His cheat gives he the perfect methods to hide his cultivation and true appearance that why they couldn’t find him till he wanted them too and due to what he cultivated he can fight way beyond his level

yah but in the story never mentioned he hid his appearance and hell everyone reacts as they see a child...then theres the,, -Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon [no reason for yun che to be engaged to xia chick...MC could've easily been allowed to]

The author of this book is the same as the one who made Man Against The Gods. Expected better since he made such a work but I got sadness instead

that bk, with in less than 3 days the chick interacted with him as though they knew each other for yrs....fking CD man,,,,like why not take time,,,,,hell u take time u get more chps and its developed rather than this rushed ****

he a gary stu

basic CD, and WD are a must my dude

uh whats CD and WD mean.....?

character development and world development

o thx

but idk why you expected so much from these types of novels anyway... I went in with zero expectations for anything great, you and I know what these types of novels are. Their basically wish fulfillment.