Dude, this asshole started destroying sects whilst he was 11 or so, and traveled the land destroying sects..How the fk is he alive? he would've been targeted by everyone and either forced to join or killed off,,,and since this dude used his name wouldnt people just kidnap family? I like OP MC but not retards like this...MC should've hidden his identity instead. Also why isnt he engaged to the xia chick instead of yun che ...so stupid...MC was the son for the xia chicks father BF and their promise works as long as the fiance is either one of his sons.... Also what do u mean this is different?...this MC just shows OF like a cunt, like every other SI in a cultivation FF, MC wins every fight cause of plot....and has no repercussions cause of plot. This dude even attacked a young master... so much stupid **** happens in ONE chp
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Que revolta cara,o autor não entrou em detalhes ussa sua imaginação eu quê foi oque o autor pensou
Magnificient Reveiw.
-Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon so much stupid ****
Gielmerson:Que revolta cara,o autor não entrou em detalhes ussa sua imaginação eu quê foi oque o autor pensou
Yeah.. same thing as the other story posted by the writer: absolute nonsense quality. If you'd been a painter, the wall behind your canvas would be 10 different colors by now.
He is a gary stu character, his herb garden+library of heavens path is an OP cheat that can easily destroying the world, he can destroy the world easily with poison(he uses the antidote to his important persons and himself), he can create OP technique to erase the world easily nyaa !!!
Try reading again, you will become a fanboy of this fanfic nyaa !!!
amaturewriter:-Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon so much stupid ****
Please give this fanfic a chance nyaa !!!
amaturewriter:-Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon so much stupid ****
everything that happens is cause of plot, I read this and his other AGT FF..the forced **** ruins it for me my dude
Devalen:He is a gary stu character, his herb garden+library of heavens path is an OP cheat that can easily destroying the world, he can destroy the world easily with poison(he uses the antidote to his important persons and himself), he can create OP technique to erase the world easily nyaa !!!
Try re-reading and checking details thoroughly
try learning about CD first
xVii:Try re-reading and checking details thoroughly
His cheat gives he the perfect methods to hide his cultivation and true appearance that why they couldn’t find him till he wanted them too and due to what he cultivated he can fight way beyond his level
yah but in the story never mentioned he hid his appearance and hell everyone reacts as they see a child...then theres the,, -Forced relationships, -Retarded MC -MC wins cause of plot, MC gets chicks cause of plot -MC is an idiot -Follow cannon [no reason for yun che to be engaged to xia chick...MC could've easily been allowed to]
MonkTsuki:His cheat gives he the perfect methods to hide his cultivation and true appearance that why they couldn’t find him till he wanted them too and due to what he cultivated he can fight way beyond his level
The author of this book is the same as the one who made Man Against The Gods. Expected better since he made such a work but I got sadness instead
that bk, with in less than 3 days the chick interacted with him as though they knew each other for yrs....fking CD man,,,,like why not take time,,,,,hell u take time u get more chps and its developed rather than this rushed ****
Aeolius:The author of this book is the same as the one who made Man Against The Gods. Expected better since he made such a work but I got sadness instead
he a gary stu
basic CD, and WD are a must my dude
Demonic_Ogre:he a gary stu
uh whats CD and WD mean.....?
amaturewriter:basic CD, and WD are a must my dude
character development and world development
Demonic_Ogre:uh whats CD and WD mean.....?
o thx
amaturewriter:character development and world development
but idk why you expected so much from these types of novels anyway... I went in with zero expectations for anything great, you and I know what these types of novels are. Their basically wish fulfillment.
amaturewriter:character development and world development
