I dont like it. Mc is a guy, then becomes a girl. The Mc becomes a slave straight away. No contact with others of the same race. NO actual development of the character or skills. First evolution is basically a bus ride. (other gives level up and exp for the evolution). Some may find it disturbing that the Mc's master is a child chick that married a 26~ or so years old elf. (I may have misread that part).
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LIKEUncle_Tamir:The Elf is 25 chick princess slave, The master chick is like 12. fucking disturbing.
Your Statement thats you my misread it could bei interpreted as a question and He answert IT and as a respons you insultet His book. Your First coment compleatly ok becouse it was your opinion and Not an insult.
Uncle_Tamir:Whoopie doo 1 year difference. Your book is retarded, sorry for your loss.
_4_:Your Statement thats you my misread it could bei interpreted as a question and He answert IT and as a respons you insultet His book. Your First coment compleatly ok becouse it was your opinion and Not an insult.
_4_:Your Statement thats you my misread it could bei interpreted as a question and He answert IT and as a respons you insultet His book. Your First coment compleatly ok becouse it was your opinion and Not an insult.
_4_:Your Statement thats you my misread it could bei interpreted as a question and He answert IT and as a respons you insultet His book. Your First coment compleatly ok becouse it was your opinion and Not an insult.