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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv43yrUncle_Sheogorath

Not too bad. I would have given it a higher rating if not for the atrocious amount of text after text I had to read without any paragraphs. Please use paragraphs! Perhaps edit your previous chapters as well to not scare away and blind your potential readers. Good luck.

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Reborn As Gilderoy Lockhart

Chaitanya_Kulkarni

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Chaitanya_Kulkarni
Chaitanya_KulkarniAuthorChaitanya_Kulkarni

Bro I used to write paragraphs but I recieved lot of feed back from readers that they could not understand.

3yr
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

Some of them were a super huge pile of text. Have many smaller paragraphs rather than 2 or 3 huge ones.

Chaitanya_Kulkarni:Bro I used to write paragraphs but I recieved lot of feed back from readers that they could not understand.
3yr
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