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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv43yramaturewriter

Paragraphs...pls just separate the paragraphs and dialogues otherwise this would cool but come on author, why do u just seperate the paragraphs and dialogues, its easy....Reason I say is cause its really hard to read....So pls just fix the structure, otherwise stories interesting

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Reborn As Gilderoy Lockhart

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interven
intervenLv5interven

Did you give 1 star for paragraph and dialogue?

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I told author so many times, he ignored, so I thought a ****ty review would make him stop,,,did he stop?

interven:Did you give 1 star for paragraph and dialogue?
Pimple_Face_13
Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

Is the paragraphing that bad?

amaturewriter:I told author so many times, he ignored, so I thought a ****ty review would make him stop,,,did he stop?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

the reviews,,,just read em

Pimple_Face_13:Is the paragraphing that bad?