Paragraphs...pls just separate the paragraphs and dialogues otherwise this would cool but come on author, why do u just seperate the paragraphs and dialogues, its easy....Reason I say is cause its really hard to read....So pls just fix the structure, otherwise stories interesting
Chaitanya_Kulkarni
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LIKEI told author so many times, he ignored, so I thought a ****ty review would make him stop,,,did he stop?
interven:Did you give 1 star for paragraph and dialogue?
amaturewriter:I told author so many times, he ignored, so I thought a ****ty review would make him stop,,,did he stop?