Review Detail of PhantomOfNyx in The Death of a Time Viewer (COMPLETED)

just subtracting for the age old "there is always room for improvement" feeling truly evil that said I swear to whoever i had reviewed this, I'm coming into this review after a while so I am going to mostly just Generalize there were aspects towards the end I felt was a slight bit rushed, but overall I respected the fact you probably desired to see the story wrapped up overall I enjoyed reading it, it was fantasy romance .... isekai... non isekai? but with a bit of a different take that kept you intrigued throughout, most of the characters were decently written with me wishing you spent a bit of time fleshing out the brother a tiny bit more beyond the (sister complex) but all in all I had an amazing time with the book and I can only recommend it to anyone interested in a decent and not too long fantasy romance story. my recommendation to the author would be to take this and spend maybe a bit of time fleshing it a bit more out and maybe unrushing the end a tiny bit and then offer it to a publication service I'm absolutely sure you will be able to find someone to pick it up!❤